Hello
Let me tell you I has was been loosed in a hill for more that 12 hours. A Few years ago my father, my brother, me and I with other six other people went for a walk to at the Romero hill, the idea was to find the way that binds (?) La Estrella with Angelopolis, for made an ecologic road by my father´s company.(?)
We stared to around 8 am, we had many thing for eat, but we not didn't wanted to carry much weight so we stared to eat and drink, ours ago (?) arrived to one place like a X, we were in the middle of 4 different ways, one for were we arrived and three more.(?)
In the group suppously was a guide and he was very sure and said that has had the to take the right way, and was like that, but he erred (?) and 2 hours after later the way we reach a dead ended, we found a beautiful fall. So we have had to return at to the center of the X and we took the same way that we were was in, which was the in front of us. because “this was the correct way”. We took our lunch and stared to walk again. Around 3 hours after later we had climbed a new mountain, but in on the top it was impossible to found find the continuity (?) of this way, so we return again, again at the center of the X. so we took the last way but not for find the way from la Estrella now it was for found find the way to Angelopolis again.
When we were in the center for last time, was I said that we should take the way for were we had arrived but nobody heard listen to me and took the last previous way. In At this moment it was around 6:30 pm and now we had no water, we continued walking and walking until that I we said NO MORE we (my brother and I) can´t continue, we were crying my feet don´t didn't do that what I said ask of them , it was the a chaos and with the everybody stared to call to somebody asking for help. Finally At the end around 12 or 1 am arrived la the civil defense or some like that and helps us arrived but it not wasn't all we had to walk 4 hours more just for to arrive to were our was the car was park. I can assure you it was traumatic, I arrived to my house around 6 am!
Since that I´ve been thinking about that experience and each time I walk I feel scare and I don´t want to get lost again.


Hello
ReplyDeleteOriana
Wow it took me a while to correct your blog.
Mostly because I kind of had to guess what you were trying to say.
You have to work on prepositions, spelling and run on sentences.
Red is to eliminate
Blue what I added
Purple what I didn't understand.
Ana